Feedback from my ideas

Idea 1

My group said they really liked how detailed my idea was and that I had a clear idea about it, and it was clear how I imagined each scene to happen. 

However they said that they thought it was a bit too complicated, which I agree with and it was my most complicated idea. We only have one day to film our opening scenes and I didn't really take this into consideration when planning my first idea as it had 3 different parts to it, which would take a lot of time to set up and film. 

Therefore I could try and change it by maybe having just two different settings/scenes which we switch back and forth between each other.

The idea of having a criminal line up may not be convenient at the moment due to Covid-19 so I would have to think of another way of portraying that with social distancing.

My group said that they liked the tens
ion created in the opening scene, and that presenting the abuse of power was a good idea. However there was a bit too much information for an opening scene

Overall I think my group liked the concept of my idea and the story behind it, and thought it is possible to carry the story forward. But we agreed it would be too complicated to film in one day and therefore would need to be adapted to fit the timescale we have.

I think I could develop this idea by making it a lot simpler and cutting it down quite a bit so i have less information and less scenes. I plan to pitch my second idea in a few days as this is one I am more confident about. 

Idea 2

My group preferred this idea as it was very clear and easy to understand, whereas my idea one was not simple and quite confusing.

My group said that it would be a lot easier to film and simpler. It is also a lot better to do with Covid restrictions as we would only need 1/2 people acting. 

I was told that my powerpoint was not as detailed as the last one and that it would be good to have some more clear ideas of what the close ups would be of as i only mentioned a few, for example, the Dr taking blood samples.

They really liked the tension created
in it and thought that the twist at the end was very good. We also agreed that it would be a good scene to do creative and effective titles, and therefore we have decided to use it as our main idea. 

Overall I think this idea was quite successful and my group liked it and think we have a lot to work with when using it as our main idea.