Feedback from production group meeting

 Today my production group and I had another meeting about developing out ideas. We talked about how we like the idea that we have at the moment, however it would only come to about one minute of footage and that on its own would not be that engaging. So we discussed what we could add before the operation to make it longer and more interesting. We thought about how we could show the whole process of the man taking the body into his attic, from the car pulling up and him taking the body bag out of the car all the way to the table. We thought this would be good for the tone we had originally thought about, and be better for using titles. 

Another idea we had was that the clone would still be alive at the beginning of the scene and we would show a fight between them. So the clone would have a gas mask/hoodie on so we couldn't see his face and they would be mirroring each others actions. Then the clone is killed. This would probably be better at engaging the audience from the beginning. However after discussing it we talked about how it wouldn't be the best for using titles in the way that we want to. It is also very different from the mood that we were trying to set - a very creepy and slow moving tone. However if we can develop this in order to make it fit more with our idea of titles and the tone that we imagined, we think it could still work very well

The other thing that we talked about is finding another way to portray that the clone is not a twin, as the labels are more telling the audience rather than showing them. So we need to think of a way of showing the audience.