Tuesday, February 9, 2021

Second Step by step outline


 - Starts with a montage of close ups:

Cobwebs in the corner of a room

Scars all over the body of the clone - Showing where he has previously been cut up

A jar with chips in - with some blood on (could be sd cards or something) 

Old dusty files

Towels/rags with blood all over them

Tray of old rusty tools - for operations on clones

Doctor opening drawer

blood dripping off table

label on the clones foot

clones face

doctors hands picking up tools 

bloody knife in drs hand

crossing something off in an old notebook with picture of clone in it - like a profile of the person and he is marking that he has got them

BLACK OUT

- then a scene with the operation

Close ups of the doctor cutting the body

A shot of the doctor operating and removing the object from the body - close up of this object 

(all throughout the operation we don't see the doctors face, only the clones)

Reveal of the doctor:

- Longer shot of the doctor holding the object - then takes label off the foot of the clone and walking over to a rusty bucket -with mirror above/next to it - still not showing his face 

- Close up of him washing blood off the object/or putting it down on a towel and then places the label the right way up next to the chip - it says ‘Dr ….. - Version 7'

- Camera moves up as doctor looks up and shows a mirror with the doctors face in it, he is looking at the cut on his face that the clone put there. We see they are the same person.

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My final opening sequence

 This is my final opening sequence: